KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 screen play clarity miss ayindi second time fast ga skip chesthe ardam ayindi Overall nice attempt Thank you so much bro... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 short film ni analyze cheyyamante nuvvu nannu chesthavendhe.... Niku... Sailapadam ayithe ne correct bavio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raaz@NBK Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Megapowersuperstylishnaturaltigerenergiticlion star Karthik bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILLUMINATI Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Nice attempt bro,, first attempt kabati aa rawness vundhi,, as you guyz do more of these, you will get the fineness. Dialogues, natural feel thevataniki try cheyandi... General ga shortfilms loo dialogues, book nunchi chaduvuthunatu vuntaye max. There is a free video editing software, it's called Hitfilm 4 express, just email tho register ayethe, download link mail ki vasthundhi, if you guyz are interested try that. : https://hitfilm.com/express BGM importance gurinchi manaki special ga chepanavasaram ledhu... Background sounds ki you can check out : https://soundcloud.com/ edhuloo search for different instrumentation muzic Eggjaample : https://soundcloud.com/fri-bitz/mafia-g-funk-instrumental .. http://www.bensound.com/royalty-free-music ... and here are many other sources, so do check them. And regarding video capture, koncham cam autofocus ekuva avuthundhi... see if you can get a flexible joby gorrelapod or a regular tripod to get more stable images. If you guys are seriously considering shortfilm making then meeru ee initial phase nunchi, drones vade range ki edhagalani my god ko prayer karthahu.. All the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rear Window Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Nice attempt bro,, first attempt kabati aa rawness vundhi,, as you guyz do more of these, you will get the fineness. Dialogues, natural feel thevataniki try cheyandi... General ga shortfilms loo dialogues, book nunchi chaduvuthunatu vuntaye max. There is a free video editing software, it's called Hitfilm 4 express, just email tho register ayethe, download link mail ki vasthundhi, if you guyz are interested try that. : https://hitfilm.com/express BGM importance gurinchi manaki special ga chepanavasaram ledhu... Background sounds ki you can check out : https://soundcloud.com/ edhuloo search for different instrumentation muzic Eggjaample : https://soundcloud.com/fri-bitz/mafia-g-funk-instrumental .. http://www.bensound.com/royalty-free-music ... and here are many other sources, so do check them. And regarding video capture, koncham cam autofocus ekuva avuthundhi... see if you can get a flexible joby gorrelapod or a regular tripod to get more stable images. If you guys are seriously considering shortfilm making then meeru ee initial phase nunchi, drones vade range ki edhagalani my god ko prayer karthahu.. All the best Thanks bhaktaa mayyaa for blessing our kuplee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rear Window Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 kuplee ee saari script naaku cheppu munde script lo changes vunte cheptaaa,screenplay raasi pedataa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Megapowersuperstylishnaturaltigerenergiticlion star Karthik bro I died Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Nice attempt bro,, first attempt kabati aa rawness vundhi,, as you guyz do more of these, you will get the fineness. Dialogues, natural feel thevataniki try cheyandi... General ga shortfilms loo dialogues, book nunchi chaduvuthunatu vuntaye max. There is a free video editing software, it's called Hitfilm 4 express, just email tho register ayethe, download link mail ki vasthundhi, if you guyz are interested try that. : https://hitfilm.com/express BGM importance gurinchi manaki special ga chepanavasaram ledhu... Background sounds ki you can check out : https://soundcloud.com/ edhuloo search for different instrumentation muzic Eggjaample : https://soundcloud.com/fri-bitz/mafia-g-funk-instrumental .. http://www.bensound.com/royalty-free-music ... and here are many other sources, so do check them. And regarding video capture, koncham cam autofocus ekuva avuthundhi... see if you can get a flexible joby gorrelapod or a regular tripod to get more stable images. If you guys are seriously considering shortfilm making then meeru ee initial phase nunchi, drones vade range ki edhagalani my god ko prayer karthahu.. All the best Sure Bro... will note down and work on it.. Thank you so much for valuable suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 kuplee ee saari script naaku cheppu munde script lo changes vunte cheptaaa,screenplay raasi pedataa Sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raghu6 Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Good Attempt bro and looks quality Bus stand lo antha easy ga marchukovatam koncham hard ga vundi - locations imp And Initial ga try chese tappudu comedy ni add cheyyandi All the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaswanth526 Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Good attempt bro Audio is not audible bro sometimes Photography good Somewhat confused with the story in the last Still good concept and great work All the best for future films Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILLUMINATI Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Thanks bhaktaa mayyaa for blessing our kuplee "Blessing" ee sounding a thrilling ga vundhi, Rear Bhayya.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILLUMINATI Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Sure Bro... will note down and work on it.. Thank you so much for valuable suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Good Attempt bro and looks quality Bus stand lo antha easy ga marchukovatam koncham hard ga vundi - locations imp And Initial ga try chese tappudu comedy ni add cheyyandi All the best Sure bro... We have time constraint... so length kooda memu 8 mins kante ekkuva vaddu anukunnam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Good attempt bro Audio is not audible bro sometimes Photography good Somewhat confused with the story in the last Still good concept and great work All the best for future films Ty for your review Epic uncle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madras Posted February 19, 2017 Share Posted February 19, 2017 Note : Nenu Short films baga rare ga chustha.... so pedda idea ledhu ela vuntaay ani..... considering budget, time, experience constraints ...definite ga gud attempt....paina andaru max chepparu..... one suggestion/complaint from my side..... 8 mins lo 5 actors and actor ki 3 shots ye vunnay....and actors antha kotthavallu....so gurtunchukovadam naaku konchem kashtamanipinchindhi.... final scene lo David vachinappudu and road meedha wait chesthunna aa kurradiki confuse ayya... deentlo story em vundhi, idhem film anukunna 1st time chusinappudu....thread chadivi malli chusthe ardhamayindhi..last lo bench meedha vundhi anwar...vachindhi David ani.....mundhu dorikindhi aa company kurradu ani.... so may be last lo some dialogues referring to their names (or) inka better ayithe.... imp 3 persons ki diff screen presence set cheyyatam (maxx friends ye vuntaaru kabattinormal janalaki immediate ga identify ayetattu evaru vundaru...so screen presence set cheyyali)... anwar ga chesina kurradu thappa evaru gurthuleru(thanu kuda beard tho konchem ruff ga vunnadu kabatti gurthunnadu).....mighata andaru normal kurrallu soft ga class ga... youth ga dresses vesukuni vunnaru.... caps, kallajodulu pettukuni....antha patti patti oke type lo maatladatam..... may be mighata iddariki(David, agent) kuda okallu konchem rough ga... or may be diff dressing(okallu complete ga formals lo vundatam something like that)...or may be diff slang pettatam ( slang or voice ni batti easy ga identify avuthaaru actors ) or may be something else... P.S : nenu edho normal cinema chusetappudu ela chusthano...ala lazy ga chusi 1st time climax ardham kaka ichina suggestion....short films ala lazy ga chudaru emo or may be attentiveness tho chuse vallaki anipinchakapovachu.... so mee requirement batti.... BTW meeru story ichina karthik aa director karthik aa vancle.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaNTRhi Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Note : Nenu Short films baga rare ga chustha.... so pedda idea ledhu ela vuntaay ani..... considering budget, time, experience constraints ...definite ga gud attempt....paina andaru max chepparu..... one suggestion/complaint from my side..... 8 mins lo 5 actors and actor ki 3 shots ye vunnay....and actors antha kotthavallu....so gurtunchukovadam naaku konchem kashtamanipinchindhi.... final scene lo David vachinappudu and road meedha wait chesthunna aa kurradiki confuse ayya... deentlo story em vundhi, idhem film anukunna 1st time chusinappudu....thread chadivi malli chusthe ardhamayindhi..last lo bench meedha vundhi anwar...vachindhi David ani.....mundhu dorikindhi aa company kurradu ani.... so may be last lo some dialogues referring to their names (or) inka better ayithe.... imp 3 persons ki diff screen presence set cheyyatam (maxx friends ye vuntaaru kabattinormal janalaki immediate ga identify ayetattu evaru vundaru...so screen presence set cheyyali)... anwar ga chesina kurradu thappa evaru gurthuleru(thanu kuda beard tho konchem ruff ga vunnadu kabatti gurthunnadu).....mighata andaru normal kurrallu soft ga class ga... youth ga dresses vesukuni vunnaru.... caps, kallajodulu pettukuni....antha patti patti oke type lo maatladatam..... may be mighata iddariki(David, agent) kuda okallu konchem rough ga... or may be diff dressing(okallu complete ga formals lo vundatam something like that)...or may be diff slang pettatam ( slang or voice ni batti easy ga identify avuthaaru actors ) or may be something else... P.S : nenu edho normal cinema chusetappudu ela chusthano...ala lazy ga chusi 1st time climax ardham kaka ichina suggestion....short films ala lazy ga chudaru emo or may be attentiveness tho chuse vallaki anipinchakapovachu.... so mee requirement batti.... BTW meeru story ichina karthik aa director karthik aa vancle.... Thank you for your valuable comments... nenu act chesina Karthik ni.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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