sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Story line : MAN WITH SHOCKING ENERGITIC.... N..... ENTHUSIASTIC CHARECTER : I'l narrate it in telugu .... guys... Manishi puttagane..... 1st athaniki emi teliyadu.... manishi mind chala empty ga untundi.... ela ayithe thana growth cycle start avtundo...... athanilo enthusiasm kuda alane peaks lo untundi...roju new things telsukovalane.. thapana untundi... so oka person.....ela alochisthadante..... every day.... athani day start avvagane... edaina new situation tho deal cheyalane.... enthusiasm untundi......inka next day malli complete ga different ga undali.....previous day gurunchi think cheyakudadu..... dats his bottom line charecter... its like unknown body disorder for him.... which he cant live with out doing like dat.... so e charecter manishilo eppati varaku ayithe enthusiasm untundo ....appati varaku continue avtune untundi...... But life lo oka point of time lo.... a charecter ki ...next following day lo kuda previous day gurunchi think chese situation vastundi.... which he never wants to do it....... Endukante if he starts thinking about passed days.... thanu different ga think chese habit stagnent ayipotundi.....inka slow ga thana lo enthusiasm kuda ..... saturate ayipotundi..... So manishi lo a situation eppudu start avthadante....... eppudaithe ....person oka ammayini Love cheyadam start chesthadoooo.....appudu person yokka thought process stop ayipotundi.... which he always starts thinking about previous past days........I mean its like stupid word vat we actually use it as "SWEET MEMORIES" SUSPENSE BOTTOM LINE : a situation lo a charecter ela deal chesthadooo....ade story.. Remainder: dis is only a line ...inka depth ga cheppali ante...its not easy.. pls give ur valuable reviews guys.... i dont know mana NTR fans ki ela anpistundoooooo..... inka e story mana tarak ki suit avtundani anukuntunanu......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sritarak Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 good attempt kani aa line ni improve cheyadam i mean scenes create cheyadam kastam bro.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 good attempt kani aa line ni improve cheyadam i mean scenes create cheyadam kastam bro.... sri tarak annay..... i think nuvvu chala keen ga observe chesav.... thanks for dat...bhayya....but na mind lo konni situations unnay... annay.. i can develop the line.... bro...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raja Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Bagundi bro..... Chala different ga undi story kani ilanti mve ni direct chayalante oka manchi director kavali, and sences develop cheyadamkuda kastam, but chala bagundi, all the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 Bagundi bro..... Chala different ga undi story kani ilanti mve ni direct chayalante oka manchi director kavali, and sences develop cheyadamkuda kastam, but chala bagundi, all the best Thanq raj NTR annay....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sritarak Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 konni scens naku pm pettu nenu kuda develop cheyadaniki try chesta...ilantivi ante naku chala istam..anni kudirite oka short film teesta deeni meeda ......story by sdp ntr ani vestale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taRAK afrESH Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 nice idea...ee mind related scripts mana telugu janalaki ardam kaavu...i have few such ideas as well...they work only in hollywood..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raja Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 story mana NTR ki kuda baguntadi, baga set avtundi, different character kada Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sritarak Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 guys tarak ki set avtadi ani matram anakandi endukante ea character kina mana annayya apt ea special ga idiiiii ani emi ledu....but mana audience ni drustilo petukovali kada.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raja Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 @sritarak.. Nuv chepindi correct aa bro, but alanti character cheyalante adi NTR matrame cheyagaladani ala anna, nen ala alochincha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 guys tarak ki set avtadi ani matram anakandi endukante ea character kina mana annayya apt ea special ga idiiiii ani emi ledu....but mana audience ni drustilo petukovali kada.... sri tarak annay......... adi nenu .....mana tarak annaya gurunche...... design chesindi ..... a line vere vallu deal chesina i dont mind.... but already ....nenu script ready cheskunna..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somu-NTR Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 story realted to nenu miku telusa baaga kanpisthundhi kada Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gopi krishna Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somu-NTR Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 adi negative ga teeskovadu if u make scnes n create scnes in new manner it will be gud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 guys.... dont worry....... a line mana Tolly wood nativity ki .... apt ga design chesanu.........nothng props..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sritarak Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 inthaki tarak ni eppudu kalustunav .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 inthaki tarak ni eppudu kalustunav .... annay....naku antha adrustam eppudu ledu..... I'm jus normal guy.... e line mana jakanna... twitter account lo post chestha.... if he replies it...k leda taravatha nenu direction training teskunaka ... nene direct chestha...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockLikeNTR Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 ooosaravelli story ani okati leak aindi kada .. adi light gaa ilane undi ... refer it boss.. u may get some insights .... adi kuda bagane undi .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raja Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 @rocklikeNTR avnu bro, aa story kuda chala baguntadi, apatlo ade asalu story anukunna pakka super hit anukunna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIVA_anNFAN Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Manaku unnadhe mass fans vallani ee story line tho convence cheyyadam kastam. Anyway performance tho convence avvachu manchi director chethilo padithe. But class people addict avutharu. This type of variations unna char tarak cheste bavuntadi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIVA_anNFAN Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Manaku unnadhe mass fans vallani ee story line tho convence cheyyadam kastam. Anyway performance tho convence avvachu manchi director chethilo padithe. But class people addict avutharu. This type of variations unna char tarak cheste bavuntadi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdpntr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 Thanq guys...... andariki.....me valuable reviews post chesinanduku..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hydbaadshah Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 kumesav bayya anthety Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ntr_jai Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Chaala baaga undi..normal ga nenu inta pedda article unte nenu kunni lines skip chesta untanu but you didnt give that chance to me chaala baaga rasav...good future undi neeku...all the best... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaswanth Posted January 21, 2012 Share Posted January 21, 2012 bottom line diff ga undhi bro, kaaani miru scenes create chese dani batti untadhi remng Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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